More Than a Throw: My Journey as a Student-Athlete
by John Gennel
Ramones
For the past months, being a thrower athlete of Badiang National High School has shaped me
not only physically, but also in my confidence, discipline, and dedication. I
started training and competing with very little experience, but with each
training day, I learned to trust myself, my technique, and my ability to
improve. Through early morning grinds, long practices, sore muscles, and
moments of self-doubt, I grew into someone who understands what real discipline
and commitment to self-improvement truly feel like.
Throwing isn’t just
about how far or how powerful you throw—it’s about consistency, patience,
dedication, hard work, discipline, and believing that even small progress is
worth it. Looking back, I am proud of how far I’ve come and grateful for how
much this sport has taught me about improving myself and becoming a better
person.
Representing my
school and my hometown has been one of the most memorable parts of my journey.
I competed in the Boholympics,
where the nerves were high and the pressure intense, but stepping into the
throwing circle alongside strong competitors motivated me even more. I also
proudly represented Anda, Bohol,
and later became a sub-cong athlete
in Guindulman, Bohol—carrying not only my own goals, but also the pride of my
town and my identity as an athlete. Every competition became a challenge, and
with every throw, I felt the strong support of my teammates and coaches
cheering me on.
Thinking about
these experiences inspires me to train harder, stay disciplined, and remain
focused. Every throw, every heavy barbell lift, every struggle to control
technique, and every moment of fatigue and pressure tested my limits—but they
also helped me grow as both a thrower athlete and a student-athlete. I have learned
that every throw is a chance to prove my skills, and every competition is an
opportunity to create new memories. I am determined to keep moving forward,
continue improving, and represent my town with pride as I pursue my athletic
journey with passion and purpose.
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